52) Too Late: MentorGrellXStudentReader

You should do a second chapter. I think this would make a lovely story! I also like the story Idea that Sphinx-Sorrel has suggested, that would be rather interesting to see. As for both your ideas. You could have where Grell reports what he has seen and the reapers go to save the poor girl, though shes now a Demon Reaper and don't remember anything when she awakens in the earth realm, she has her female body back but is still a demon, she has a feeling of right and wrong and knows her job of reaping souls as both you have said, Grell runs into her and she does not know him, the only thing going through her mind is to kill the threat. Grell could not want to really hurt her in turn ends up being injured by the reader who slowly snaps out of it realzing what she had done. And as for the climax, or main plot. The reader could have been someone Satan really wanted and could have demons after her and so she is forced to hide and fight for her life as well as figure out why everyone wants her so bad, in the pass time both charater and Grell growing more feelings for one another. And the fluff ;w;

Also.. I've very sorry for this ranting.. I just really love reading and I love the character Grell.. its just no one writes any good story's about him and the reader. ^^'' I am just wishing to help. <3